Fiasco
‘I am not staying
here, honey,’ she blurted as she came out of the bathroom. She was looking
perturbed.
‘Why?’ he asked in despair.
They had been planning for this trip for three years and he did not want it to
end the way their last holiday ended. Last time she had slipped in the bathroom
within one hour of their arrival. She had badly damaged her ankle; they had to
take the first flight back.
‘Please, it is nothing
serious. Don’t get angry. I can sense your despair but I think I have
blundered.’
‘Don’t talk in riddles,
and tell me what is wrong.’
The first flight back would
leave within three hours; they had to decide quickly.
‘There was a breakdown in
the water supply in the morning and……I think I forgot to check the taps before
leaving. I am afraid……… the taps aren’t closed.’ She could hardly utter the
last few words.
‘The house would already
be flooded if………’
He gave her a searing
look and picked up the phone.
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A post for Flash Fictionfor the Purposeful Practitioner, and
Word count 173
Good next door neighbors come in handy then. Not sure he will forgive her the second time!
ReplyDeleteNever let her do anything with bathrooms lol
ReplyDeletethanks Pat
DeleteOh no. She just has to ruin the vacation again. Maybe call neighbours or close friends? Or did she do it on purpose? Enjoyed your take!
ReplyDeleteGoing away is stressful -- can certainly empathise
ReplyDeletethanks Jae
DeleteThis is me! I always spend my holidays worrying about what I've left on, left plugged in, left unlocked, left.......
ReplyDeleteMy Sunday Threesome!
thanks Keith
DeleteHistory repeats itself! Better luck next time. Enjoyed this :) .
ReplyDeletethanks jessie
DeleteWill they have courage to plan another vacation? I hope they do.
ReplyDeleteNicely written...
--Nimi
www.NimiArora.com
thanks
Deletegood writing
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