First Solo
Flight
I had waited years for
this day; but who could have imagined that the day would end as a farce.
As a little kid I had
always wanted to be a pilot; of course on some days I had a desire to become an
ice-cream seller. In between I had developed an attraction for uniforms and I had
often wondered whether I should choose to be a cop or a bus conductor.
But I was given little
option by our father who had already decided that one day I would run his
departmental store. He had a very low opinion of my brothers; out of sheer
frustration he allowed them to pursue their dreams. I was the chosen one who inherited his
business and his dream.
I did well for myself and
the family. When everything that needed to be settled had been settled, I
thought of pursuing my dream. It took some effort and lot of money before I
learnt to fly. And finally the day came when I was told that I could fly solo.
It was my fiftieth
birthday and everyone was there to watch my first solo flight. My brothers had
also come, carrying a huge aeroplane; it was my birthday cake.
I was excited for I had
waited years for this day. But perhaps I was overexcited and that was mistake. I
would soon regret.
As I walked towards the
aircraft everyone started clapping; the little kids, and there were many of
them, were shouting gleefully. These were electrifying moments; I almost ran
towards the aircraft.
Suddenly I tripped on
something and fell; I had hurt my left foot. A doctor was summoned who advised
that I should be promptly taken to an orthopaedic surgeon.
It was my first trip to a
hospital and on a day for which I had waited for years.
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A post for Flash Fictionfor the Purposeful Practitioner on a photo prompt and opening sentence, ‘I had
waited years for this day…….’
Another exciting story, but too much excitement can end in a farce. Gratefully, gone are the days when parents decided your future. My father regrets having done exactly that upto this day.
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DeletePerhaps it was meant to be! Great story as usual.
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thanks Keith
DeleteA mini tragedy - a life used up on someone else's dream, then the spoiling of the characters own. Let's hope they get back in the plane soon
ReplyDeletethanks Lynn
DeleteUgg, one little misstep, literally sometimes, can change life in many ways.
ReplyDeleteone step here or there
Deleteand you won't even know you land where
thanks Pat
Ahh! A tragic incident, but a great story!
ReplyDeletethanks Maniparna
DeleteThis was sheer tragedy but you've weaved a great story
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