The Stink
Photo prompt © Ted Strutz
For years he had spent
every drop of his energy to get away from the stink that haunted him even beyond
his childhood.
Nobody seemed to mind the
stink. For them, perhaps, it did not exist. But he found it nauseating.
The day workers came in
their truck to clean the public lavatory, which was just behind their one-room
home, the stink would become unbearable and he would invariably vomit. Mother
would only scold him.
He was now years away
from his childhood and miles away from that stinking public lavatory, but even
now he was scared of the stink.
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A post for Friday Fictioneers
on a photo prompt.
Word count 100
Dear Arora,
ReplyDeleteSmell is something that never leaves our memory. Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
thanks rochelle
DeleteSense of smell is one of the most powerful... good or bad!!
ReplyDeletethanks Dale
DeleteI think I know where that public toilet is. It'll gag you in the summer.
ReplyDeleteThanks Russell
DeleteMeaningful behind the words!
ReplyDeleteA great write, IB:)
thanks amit
DeleteSome things stay with you for ever, I guess.
ReplyDeletethanks sandra
DeleteJust the thought makes me flinch in sympathy. Good story.
ReplyDeleteThanks Ga
DeleteYes, scents stay with you all your life, good ones and those that 'make you vomit'
ReplyDeletethanks for stopping by
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