Horizon
We knew that any moment Sun would set but we were still
hopeful that the search teams would find us before the gloomy darkness
descended on us.
We looked as intently as we could but we saw nothing except a
deafening emptiness that stretched right up to the horizon; we could hear
nothing but our heartbeats.
It was the tenth day and we had yet not lost hope; or so it
seemed to some of us.
Someone asked, “Don’t you think that the birds are unusually silent and
waves are unusually calm?”
We refused to look at one other when someone else responded,
“Perhaps it will end today.”
Linking this to Five Sentence Fiction hosted by Lillie
Mcferrin
Prompt-Horizon
You got my attention right away!
ReplyDeletethanks Helen for liking it
DeleteOh, the end of the world? Very well rittne.
ReplyDeletethanks freya for your comments
DeleteWOW.. Beautifully penned. What happened next?
ReplyDeletethanks Vinitha, what happened next? even i am scared to imagine
DeleteClear and concise, the fear and tension are palpable. Well written.
ReplyDeleteThe fear and tension are palpable.
Here is my story: http://mcguffysreader.blogspot.com/2014/10/horizon.html
thanks Ann Morris for reading and liking it
Deletesad ending, beautifully penned
ReplyDeleteThe Performer
thanks for liking it
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