A Muffled Cry
He was surprised that he could finish the job without losing his nerve;
he was composed even when he had slashed her face.
It was a perfect murder; he was sure of that. No one would ever come to know
as to what had happened to her. In this city no one really cared; they had been
living together for three years but very people knew her. No one would miss
her.
He was anxious to call Ann; they had to get married before she left for France.
As he entered the room he was unnerved for a few moments; a mystifying
emptiness enveloped him.
“I must quickly get rid of everything that belonged to her… and that
doll… that disgusting doll…I would burn it to ashes. How could she even like
that abominable thing?”
He searched every nook and corner of the flat but the doll was nowhere
to be found. He was certain that it was lying on the bed when they had left in
the morning.
He heard a muffled cry; it stunned him. He thought someone was crying in
the bathroom. It terrified him; she was in the habit of locking herself in the
bathroom and crying for hours.
He entered the bathroom. The doll was in the bathroom; it had two deep
scars, as if someone had slashed its face.
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A post for Sunday Photo Fiction
Word count 228
I hope the doll haunts him. :)
ReplyDeleteOoh that was freaky. I like it.
ReplyDeleteThat's bit spooky. Love it.
ReplyDeletethanks, i intended it that way
Deletewell done!
ReplyDeleteGreat write..a bit scary though..
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DeleteSuperb twist.
ReplyDeletethanks, nice you liked it
DeleteA proper halloween chiller!
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