Midnight Knock
It was past midnight. I
woke up with a start. I thought someone was knocking at the door.
Our house is a bit
isolated, surrounded on three sides by paddy fields and by an orchard in the
backyard. The nearest house is at least half a kilometer away. But I was not
normally scared by such midnight knocks; I had a couple of German shepherds to
keep a watch on all intruders. But surprisingly they were silent and that was unusual of them.
I opened the door and was
shocked to see an alien. Far away in the paddy field I could see the unblinking
lights of a spacecraft.
I felt nervous and was
unable to say anything.
‘You are a doctor? I need
your help. I got an eye problem,’ the alien said in an extremely pleasant
voice. Of course, he himself was ugly looking.
‘But I can’t treat you; I
am not an eye surgeon. In fact………’
But the alien was in too
much of a hurry. He muttered some unintelligible words and pressed some buttons on
his left arm. In a flash both of us were inside the space craft. He led me to a
brightly lit futuristic operation theater and said, ‘You must help me. I have
to go back to my universe but I can’t travel till my eyesight is restored.’
‘But I am a veterinary
doctor…….’
‘I never said I am a
human being…..’
That left me speechless. I
looked at his left eye; something in it frightened me.
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A post for Sunday PhotoFiction and for Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers on picture prompts
The logic here is immaculate. Wonderfully Lucid.
ReplyDeletethanks for stopping by
DeleteNot fair... you often give abrupt ends. :(
ReplyDeletei lose the way after beginning, thanks
DeleteSo they get to probe the alien, that's a reversal haha
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DeleteBrilliant... But ye dil maange more!!! :)
ReplyDeletearre mera dil bhi maange more, thanks
DeleteLOL! "I never said I was human." Hahaha! Seems they found the right Doctor! Cute story!
ReplyDeleteWell that was a cliffhanger. It would make a great longer story or sci-fi-novel. Good descriptions, I.B. :) --- Suzanne
ReplyDeletethanks Suzanne
DeleteExcellent. I like that :-) Love the way you ended it as well.
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