Fear
A malignant fear was devouring them all.
In just one week five girls had been attacked;
every girl had her face brutally scratched. There was an enemy
out there in the forest but no one knew who that enemy was.
Everyone was thinking of the old man. He was a maverick but he was wise. He could talk to birds and animals and the spirits of the forest. He was fearless and even the ghosts were terrified of him. But they had annoyed him.
He just wanted to marry a little pretty girl with beautiful eyes. But the Chief intervened; the Chief had chosen to have that girl as his new wife.The
It was late afternoon. The old man was squatting under a
tree. He chuckled at the huge monkey who was greedily picking little berries
from his hand. These berries were the best aphrodisiac he had ever tried. The
monkey, like the old man, relished these berries.
The old man said to the monkey, “They must all be regretting now, no? Fear has descended on them like a thick fog. They are all frightened like little rats. Should I help the ungrateful folks? What do you say? They are nothing but filthy scum; don’t you think so? But if you allow I will help them. I know how to deal with the invisible enemy, no?”
The old man winked at the monkey. It had eagerly gulped all the berries; it clawed his empty hand and laughed viciously as if the old man had said a funny thing.
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Very interesting... beautifully weaved Aroraji :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks Archana
DeleteThis was indeed maverick, left plenty to imagination, elegant vocab.
ReplyDeletethanks, well a short story has to leave certain things unsaid.
DeleteLoved this piece! Thanks for sharing.
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DeleteWe have the same word of the day :) I loved this little tale. The cackling of the monkey gave me shivers, tho :)
ReplyDeleteThank you for your visit to my blog, have a great a to z!
Sylvia van Bruggen
thanks Sylvia
DeleteVery interesting. You got quite a few 'F' words in there!
ReplyDeleteThanks Trisha for stopping by
DeleteThat is one mean little monkey
ReplyDeletethanks pat
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ReplyDeleteAnother gem. True monkey business!
ReplyDeleteKeith's Ramblings : My short story has 3 obscure F's
thanks Keith
DeleteMonkeys can be really creepy and now even more so.
ReplyDeleteSusan Says
thanks susan
DeleteBrowsing the list, enjoy the challenge AtoZ
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Deletegood writing
ReplyDeleteThanks for stopping by
DeleteInteresting tale. The ending left it open for all sorts of possibilities.
ReplyDelete~Ninja Minion Patricia Lynne aka Patricia Josephine~
Story Dam
Patricia Lynne, Indie Author
thanks Patricia, the reader must have some liberty to imagine the ending
DeleteBrutal revenge. The old man knew very well that fear is the most primal feeling... Nicely narrated as always, Aroraji... :-)
ReplyDeletethanks Maniparna for stopping by
DeleteOh that is wicked.
ReplyDeleteWell told.
thanks Indrani
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