Sunday, 10 April 2016

Diamonds For Ever
Jhardy
                                                                               Photo prompt © J Hardy Carroll
Even thirty years of imprisonment did not diminish his lust for the diamonds.
He was convicted for murder and not for robbery. The police could never recover the diamonds. Only Frank knew where the diamonds were hidden. And he had killed Frank but had foolishly left behind a clue. He was caught and convicted.
As he entered the desolate and dilapidated building he was accosted by a young man.
‘You think diamonds are still here?’
He could not believe his ears, ‘How does this man know?’
He stared hard at the young man and was stunned; he was staring at Frank.
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19 comments:

  1. Abhijit Ray10 April 2016 at 19:25

    Who was this second man? An illusion, imagination or relation to Frank?

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    1. i b arora10 April 2016 at 19:59

      its for the reader to imagine, i think he was a ghost, thanks for stopping by

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  2. Unknown10 April 2016 at 19:48

    Ghost again!!!! Love your stories Aroraji 😊😊

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    1. i b arora10 April 2016 at 20:00

      this month it would be ghost stories only, thanks

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  3. NN Malhotra10 April 2016 at 21:36

    Waiting for the ghosts to vanish.

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  4. Anonymous10 April 2016 at 22:47

    Nice creepy touch.

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  5. shortybear10 April 2016 at 23:07

    awesome

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  6. Leigh Caron10 April 2016 at 23:50

    the photos sets the state.

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    1. i b arora11 April 2016 at 08:01

      that gave me the idea of a creepy story, thanks

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  7. brudberg11 April 2016 at 00:50

    Ah.. and ghosts don't age do they.. I wonder if Frank will show him were they are hidden?

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    1. i b arora11 April 2016 at 08:01

      or may be Frank will seek revenge, thanks

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  8. Gah Learner11 April 2016 at 02:41

    He'll get the ghost busters, and then what'll Frank do? ;) Fun story.

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    1. i b arora11 April 2016 at 08:02

      there could by any number of twists and turns, thanks for stopping by

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  9. Russell12 April 2016 at 01:22

    That ought to be enough to give him a heart attack. Interesting twist.

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    1. i b arora12 April 2016 at 08:09

      yes the karma never leaves you, thanks for the comments

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  10. Rochelle Wisoff-Fields12 April 2016 at 15:13

    Dear Arora,

    I think he's in trouble. Nicely done.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. i b arora13 April 2016 at 10:21

      i thought you missed my post this week, thanks

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