Convoluted
All of us were confused and confounded when Viraj
said that he had been looking for a haunted house.
‘Are you serious? You want to live in a haunted house? Are
you crazy?’
‘I believe that we have always reviled and ill-treated the
ghosts and the spirits for no true reason. I want to make amends for all the
sins committed by men against all unearthly beings. I want to share my
world with them and live in harmony with them.’
His reasoning was no doubt complex and convoluted.
But all of us could see his determination in his eyes.
‘Your search ends now. I know a house that’s haunted. You can
buy it. But I shouldn’t be blamed if anything horrible happens to you or your
family,’ said Zohaan.
‘Nothing would happen to us, I have no doubt about that,’ Viraj
said confidently.
He bought the haunted house; in fact he could negotiate
a real bargain.
‘Is that house really haunted?’ we were all curious
and asked Zohaan.
‘No. He is a pretentious fellow and I want to expose him. Let
him come and tell his scary stories about the ghosts and then I will reveal
the truth.’
Viraj’s wife was not sure if they were doing the right thing,
‘I am really scared of ghosts. We should
not have moved in here.’
‘My dear, how would I have got a house at half the price if
it were not haunted? And don’t you worry; it’s not a haunted house for there’s
no such thing as a ghost.’
But later that night itself Viraj woke up with a start; he thought
that he had heard a strange coughing sound. He looked around. The night light was off
although he was certain that they had left it on.
He felt there was someone in the room. He tried to switch on
the night light but his hand touched something that was ice-cold and flabby. He
almost screamed in terror.
He fumbled for a few seconds before he managed to switch the
light on. A dim blue light spread in the room like a morning mist. He
looked at his wife. She was sleeping like a baby. There was no one in the room
except them.
‘Was she coughing? No, I must have been dreaming,’ he
muttered and went back to sleep.
He had hardly fallen asleep when he felt a cold, flabby
hand on his throat. Someone coughed, almost in his face. He couldn’t
suppress a scream.
‘What’s wrong….a bad dream….and don’t grab my throat again,’ his
wife mumbled in annoyance.
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Post for A to Z Challenge 2016
very interesting read :-)
ReplyDeletethanks archana
DeleteA Monday morning thrill. Nicely done! Thank you for sharing.
ReplyDeletethanks Nicola
DeleteI have always wanted to know how someone feels while writing horror..
ReplyDeleteThe reading is scaaaaary.. my throat is dry.
Great piece!
Seena from
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it's rather writing a dark story, thanks for stopping by
DeleteI don't like reading dark, horror stuff as a rule. But I enjoyed reading this, because the gruesome is implied, rather than in your face...
ReplyDelete--Nimi
www.NimiArora.com
thanks nimi
DeleteHis wife is probably going to have her slumber interrupted for ever more! Great tale.
ReplyDelete'The Choir', a short story with 2 neglected words
thanks keith
DeleteOh! I hope i will get good sleep tonight. :(
ReplyDeleteOooo, spooky. Cold flabby hands grabbing necks would not make for a peaceful night's sleep.
ReplyDeletethanks for stopping by
DeletePoor Viraj :)
ReplyDeleteand about his poor wife!!!! thanks for the visit
DeleteConvoluted, indeed. Nicely done!
ReplyDeletethanks Laura
DeleteC is also for creepy! Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteYvonne
thanks for stopping, yes i was trying something creepy
DeleteOh My God !! Really a scary one....
ReplyDeletethanks maya for the visit
DeleteOh My God !! Really a scary one....
ReplyDeleteTry reading such story past midnight to know how convoluted it could be.
ReplyDeleteyou got it right, thanks
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