Monday, 29 September 2014


Confusion

Panic rising, he tried to walk as briskly as possible in the fading light; why is it so dark even though it is not even noon?
He was certain that he would never reach in time and he would again miss the train.
But where am I going and why do I have to catch this train at this time of the day?
I must be dreaming; yes, it is a dream and like a fool I am getting worried and confused.
But how can it be a dream if I am awake and walking on this road; I must run as fast as I can and catch the train.


Linking this to Five Sentence Fiction-Prompt Confusion hosted by Lillie Mcferrinhttp://lilliemcferrin.com/five-sentence-fiction-confusion/


4 comments:

  1. A dreamy sequence... and almost a soliloquy ...nicely done... :-)

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  2. thanx Maniparna, in fact it is a dream sequence

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    1. thanks Indrani, you are regularly reading my posts, i am grateful for that

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