Friday 2 December 2016

Revolver
PHOTO PROMPT © Jan Wayne Fields
                                                                                Photo prompt © Jan Wayne Fields

‘I know you’re going to turn prickly but I have to admit I misled you.
‘There are some Bigfoots around here, that’s the rumour. We are going to search for Bigfoot.
They laughed thinking that it was one was his quintessential pranks. But it wasn't a prank.
They were dumbstruck. They ought to have known; he was a rabid adventurer.
‘Are you out of your mind? We don’t even have a toy-gun for protection.’
‘I have brought my father’s revolver.’
At that moment there was some commotion; there was something outside their tent. They all froze in fear.
A hairy hand entered the tent, it was holding a revolver.
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Word count 108

12 comments:

  1. I have an author friend (Pamela Foster) who was raised in Bigfoot country. She put together an anthology of Bigfoot stories by different authors that's very entertaining.

    I love the ending to this one. Great job!

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  2. Wow. It looks like Big Foot expected trouble and came armed. Great story, I.B. Good writing. :) --- Suzanne

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  3. I would fear anything with a gun much more than any beast... this sounds like a hairy situation.

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  4. There are too many guns in wrong hands. Nice twist.

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