Outrage
Her outrage was more contrived than real.
But he genuinely believed that he had hurt her; he was too innocent
to think otherwise. He adored her and could not hurt her, not even in his dreams.
“But Sara is madly in love with me,” he said as meekly as
possible. He refrained from saying that he too was madly in love with Sara.
“How does that matter? No one can love you as truly as I do. Mark
my words, if you accept her love you will regret one day; you will come back to
me.”
“I could have just married her; but your love for me was a
hurdle that I couldn’t cross. You know I can’t do anything that will hurt you.”
“Don’t flatter me? How could you even think of loving anyone else?
Don’t break my heart?”
He was almost in tears for he truly loved Sara. She was
unmoved, but only for a few moments.
“Now don’t cry like a kid; grow up. Fine, tell her parents to
meet me.”
He couldn’t find words to thank her. But his sparkling eyes
said everything.
“I hope Sara doesn't disappoint me.”
“No, she won’t.”
“I am sure you would have chosen the best girl to be my
daughter-in-law.”
And she laughed; unlike her contrived outrage, her laughter
was warm with motherly affection and truly genuine.
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A post for A to Z April (2015) Challenge.
O for Outrage
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Lovely twist - I was trying to work out the relationship as I read!
ReplyDeleteAnnalisa, writing A-Z vignettes, at Wake Up, Eat, Write, Sleep
Thanks Annalisa
DeleteI couldn't figure out who 'she' was. She is right that he needs to grow up.
ReplyDeleteThanks Susan
DeleteTook me a couple of reads then it all became clear - I think! Nice one Annalisa.
ReplyDeletei intended it that way, thanks Keith
Deletesaw your name at David King's site and loved your moniker.
ReplyDeleteI hope that relationship works out...
Thanks Susan
DeleteTricky stuff love is when it comes to youth. Man that makes me sound old. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks David for the visit
DeleteHe he nice one ... I was wondering if the protagonist was already his wife and he was asking to marry one another person.. :D :) ..
ReplyDeleteThanks Vinay, you can't expect a sensible to make same mistake again
Deletewow.. that's a cute story :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Roohi
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