Abandon
“Can I come with you? Would it be proper?” she asked, almost
nonchalantly, when he was about to leave.
He looked at her; he was slowly realizing that she was a puzzle
which he could not unravel.
“You very well know that the invitation is for both of us;
you did not want to come; you were adamant; I had told you that it would be
very embarrassing for me if you were not with me, but still you declined.”
“I wanted you to insist but you did not; you chose to abandon
me; you are just waiting for an opportunity but I won’t let you flirt with
those….”
He left, wondering, did he ever love her or did she ever love
him; outside, it was all foggy.
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A post for Five Sentence Fiction
Word prompt- abandon
Ah, what volumes can a little conversation speak. A very unique take on the prompt.
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ReplyDeleteLove the last lines. A tale of unrequited love expressing extraordinary feelings and emotions:)
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thanks vishal
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