Stained Glass
He was too stunned to say anything.
He couldn’t believe his ears. He somehow managed to say a few words… usual
words.
“Hello, how are we?”
“Good, you haven’t forgotten it.
You are shocked, no? You were sure that I was…..”
“No…..but….”
“Let’s meet….same place. They
altered it, now it’s a fantastic…..”
He didn’t respond. He felt a tremor.
“What fun it was, to be young and…….
reckless?” Suddenly Rayaan sounded cold and unemotional.
He wasn’t listening. He was back in
Stained Glass and the brawl. He had wounded Rayaan, fatally. All these years he
was sure Rayaan was dead.
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A post for Friday Fictioneers on a picture
prompt
Word Count 100
And what now does Rayaan have in mind as revenge? An intriguing set-up. I'm hooked
ReplyDeleteyes, there are always some comebacks. thanks
DeleteRevenge seems to be in the air, this could get nasty!
ReplyDeletethanks
DeleteHum. Was she or wasn't she?
ReplyDeleteeven i don't know, thanks
DeleteA story of discovery. Very nice.
ReplyDeleteThe past comes back to bite.
ReplyDeletealways, thanks for reading the story
DeleteWhat a shock to speak to one believed dead. Will there be revenge?
ReplyDeletewho knows? there are always twists and turns in life. thanks for reading it
DeleteDear Arora,
ReplyDeleteApparently Rayaan recovered. Oops. I wonder if this is a happy reunion?
Shalom,
Rochelle
thanks
DeleteIs Rayaan there to forgive or seek revenge? Great plot!
ReplyDeletesomething should be left unsaid, thanks
Deletei b arora, what a cliffhanger you left us with. I really hope you write another chapter to this story. I want to know if/how he is able to talk his way out of this -- and if he's still living afterwards.
ReplyDeleteit can end in many different ways, no? thanks for reading the blog
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