Friday, 28 January 2022

 

Stained Glass



He was too stunned to say anything. He couldn’t believe his ears. He somehow managed to say a few words… usual words.

“Hello, how are we?”

“Good, you haven’t forgotten it. You are shocked, no? You were sure that I was…..” 

“No…..but….”

“Let’s meet….same place. They altered it, now it’s a fantastic…..”

He didn’t respond. He felt a tremor.

“What fun it was, to be young and……. reckless?” Suddenly Rayaan sounded cold and unemotional.

He wasn’t listening. He was back in Stained Glass and the brawl. He had wounded Rayaan, fatally. All these years he was sure Rayaan was dead. 

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A post for Friday Fictioneers on a picture prompt

Word Count 100

18 comments:

  1. And what now does Rayaan have in mind as revenge? An intriguing set-up. I'm hooked

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    1. yes, there are always some comebacks. thanks

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  2. Revenge seems to be in the air, this could get nasty!

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  3. A story of discovery. Very nice.

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  4. The past comes back to bite.

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  5. What a shock to speak to one believed dead. Will there be revenge?

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    1. who knows? there are always twists and turns in life. thanks for reading it

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  6. Dear Arora,

    Apparently Rayaan recovered. Oops. I wonder if this is a happy reunion?

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  7. Is Rayaan there to forgive or seek revenge? Great plot!

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  8. i b arora, what a cliffhanger you left us with. I really hope you write another chapter to this story. I want to know if/how he is able to talk his way out of this -- and if he's still living afterwards.

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    1. it can end in many different ways, no? thanks for reading the blog

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