Monday, 4 March 2019


The Place

“That’s the place, I am sure, I am so grateful… you took all the trouble to bring me here. That’s the place. No doubt about it…..”
The young man looked at the old haggard face and, and for a moment, felt sorry for him. His worst fear had come true.
“It’s here that I met her first…..I remember everything so clearly.”
“But you came here to kill someone?” the young man whispered.
The old man trembled and looked at the young man; his eyes became lifeless.
“I was wondering you resembled ….” the old man said and stopped abruptly.  
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A post for Friday Fictioneers
Word count 99

4 comments:

  1. A long gestating revenge is in the offing!

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  2. Perhaps the young man cannot go through with his plans, his pity for the old man may overwhelm him.

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