Good Samaritan
It was a beautiful day. There was not
much traffic on the road. We were enjoying our drive. But we didn’t know that things
were about to change.
The clouds came and soon the sky was
flooded with thick, dark clouds. It was
late afternoon but day had unexpectedly turned into a night.
The rain came. We kept driving but
slowly. The visibility was diminishing rapidly; the rain had very quickly turned
into a torrential downpour.
We had to stop abruptly. A huge tree
had fallen and had blocked the road.
It was so dark that we could not see as
to what was on either side of the road. We had no option but to wait for the
rain to stop and for the visibility to improve.
For no apparent reason we were
talking to one another in hushed tones.
‘We are stuck in the middle of
nowhere, no.’
‘Let us turn back.’
‘Let the rain stop.’
“But…’
A light at flashed at us. Someone
knocked at the window.
‘Why don’t you follow me; you must be
going to the engineering college?’ it was a Good Samaritan, out of nowhere.
We all looked at one another unsure
of what we ought to do. We eventually
decided to follow him.
But he moved to quickly we were not
able to keep pace with him. Soon we were alone on a narrow road in a dark
forest.
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A post for FFfAW on a photo prompt
Oh very good with a creepy factor! Just the thought of being on a narrow road in a dark forest during a torrential downpower sends chills up and down my spine. Great story! I noticed an extra "the" in the 5th paragraph, first sentence. Thought you might want to fix that. (Just a little typo). Thank you so much for participating in Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers challenge! I enjoyed your story!
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