Sunday 18 November 2018


The Arrogant


“This is the place…no one will know….let’s dig here and bury it.” said Taby.
Beny didn’t answer … he was busy with his boat.
“Come here…..we don’t have all the time…”
“You are a fool…why did you pelt a rock…killing the ….”
“Not another word,” shrieked Taby; he was already regretting his folly.
Beny smiled; the boat was finally afloat.
Taby furiously dug a small pit and, with trembling hand, buried the dead.
“I wish I had missed the mark.”
“You are arrogant…..always pelting rocks at little birds. This time I will tell mama……”
Next moment Beny was in the water…… screeching like hell.
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Word count 106
A post for Friday Fictioneers on a picture prompt.


8 comments:

  1. I had to read this several times because I wasn't sure who was speaking at times. But then I worked it out. A killer is possibly more likely to have a short fuse and a fatal breaking point than most and it seems Taby has. Jilly, Sugar on the Bee.

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    1. well, i thought of a story of two little naughty brothers;the elder one liked pelting stones at the birds. one day he actually killed a little bird.
      thanks for reading the story.

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  2. I think Taby might be heading for worse in the future... unless he face up to his arrogance.

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  3. Well, it sounds like he's learned his lesson and that's the last time he will throw a stone at a bird. Good take on the photo prompt. :)

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  4. Dear Arora,

    What goes around comes around, they say. Hopefully Beny has learned his lesson.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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