The Deserted Car
‘Every deserted car has a tale to tell,’ Jimmy said in an ominous voice.
His friend wasn’t impressed.
‘What’s the tale this car is telling?’
Jimmy pretended to seriously ponder for a few seconds, ‘I think someone deliberately
left this car here to hide something…..perhaps a dead body….. I saw a movie…..the
goons killed a girl and left her in the boot of a car…’
‘Let’s go and check…. there may…. in this car also’
Jimmy felt scared but reluctantly followed his friend. He had to act
bravely; he was two years older.
The friend opened the boot of the car and shrieked in terror.
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A post for Friday Fictioneers
Word count 105
I think the friend is fooling him
ReplyDeletei too think so, thanks for reading it.
ReplyDeleteHaha.. nice game played over his friend
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DeleteFooling or not, your words surely surged adrenaline in nervous anticipation! Nice!
ReplyDeletethanks for stopping by
DeleteThe friend is definitely playing a joke on him.
ReplyDeletethanks, but perhaps there was a dead body in the car
DeleteThis reminds of what i think every time I see a plastic garbage bag in a ditch...
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DeleteDon't they know every abandoned car has a secret to hide!
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DeleteGreat anticipation.
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