The First Snow
They were looking at the snow-covered tree; the old man had a wistful
look and child had a curious look.
‘Grandpa, it’s just amazing, this snow. I wish I had come here earlier.’
The old man looked at the child, almost bewitched. How could the child say
the same words? The child looked at his grandpa and smiled. He even smiles like
her, the old man thought.
It was almost fifty years back when they had come to this place. She had
never been to the mountains and the first snow had mesmerized her.
‘It’s just amazing, this snow; I wish I had come here earlier.’ She smiled;
he felt an imperceptible squeeze on his hand.
The child tugged at the grandpa’s sleeve; the old man came out of his
reverie. He felt sad for her; the child would have made her ecstatic.
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A post for Sunday Photo Fiction
Word count 143
Oh wow. What a beautiful story of memory. I was trying to think of something else than "memory" but I could only come up with repetition and that would have given the wrong impression. Words and me don't do well together at the moment lol
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DeletePoignant, with a lovely light touch.
ReplyDeleteEnchanting, with lots unsaid.
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DeleteThat is certainly a beautiful tale about invoking a memory.
ReplyDeletethanks for appreciating my effort
DeleteA lovely poignancy to this tale - nostalgic and sas with a sharp, pin like hit. Nice take on the prompt
ReplyDeletethanks Lynn
DeleteNice touching tale, the nostalgic melancholy tone suits the prompt and this time of year perfectly. Well done.
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DeleteNice, very touching story.
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DeleteBeautiful...and touching as well...
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DeleteSuch a moving tale. Delightful.
ReplyDeleteMy story - One Winter's Night
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DeleteLovely writing, an emotional piece.
ReplyDeletethanks Amanda
DeleteAah, lovely story.
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ReplyDeleteLovely story, I.B. Children can say some fabulous things. Good writing. :) --- Suzanne
ReplyDeleteHey keep posting such good and meaningful articles.
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